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PollockPants
ubw newbie
Joined: Mar 02, 2009
Location: scotland
Posts: 8
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| Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 4:00 pm |
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Hey,
im an unsigned artist
I recently supported The Beautiful South in their UK tour
and i decided to post some of my lyrics and see what responce i got
this is the title song off my EP
HEALING BONES
Dive in deep,
Swallow it whole
You take the hardest way,
And I take the long walk home
Chorus
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Ooh take it easy
Ooh let it all cool down
Ooh take it easy
Ooh let your bones heal now
bones heal now
bones heal now
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you feel the heat
bubbling up inside
you feel the beat
beat beat beat
of your cheating heart
Chorus
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Ooh take it easy
Ooh let it all cool down
Ooh take it easy
Ooh let your bones heal now
bones heal now
bones heal now
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dive in deep
swallow it whole
you feel the beat
beat beat beat
of your cheaing heart
Chorus
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Ooh take it easy
Ooh let it all cool down
Ooh take it easy
Ooh let your bones heal now
bones heal now
bones heal now
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Chorus
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Ooh take it easy
Ooh let it all cool down
Ooh take it easy
Ooh let your bones heal now
bones heal now
bones heal now
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elex
ubw rookie
Joined: Nov 27, 2008
Posts: 82
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 3:09 am |
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Good composition.. Keep it up! |
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PollockPants
ubw newbie
Joined: Mar 02, 2009
Location: scotland
Posts: 8
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:15 am |
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gunner
ubw luminary
Joined: Jan 30, 2004
Location: Planet Earth
Posts: 772
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 3:26 pm |
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good lyric writing indeed.....going over to hear what they sound like with music.... |
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gunner
ubw luminary
Joined: Jan 30, 2004
Location: Planet Earth
Posts: 772
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 3:33 pm |
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Good music...i am not a big fan of acoustic music...but loved your voice...very young and innocent sounding...a cross between. brittany spears,jessica simpson and avril lavign..or however you spell it..lol
but i still did enjoy it.....by the way...i am relations to the "Gunn Clan" there in Scotland..not that it means anything...just thought since you from scotland...etc..etc....and your eyes are as blue as mine..lol
keep up the good work rebecca...why not get a webpage here and post some music..... |
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elex
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Joined: Nov 27, 2008
Posts: 82
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| Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 10:06 pm |
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I'm good.. Ok I will check out.. Thanks! |
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