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texter-bernd
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| Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 4:40 am |
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While I was racking my brain to come up with ideas for Karsten's coming-of-age song the following text came to my mind:
well, it's okay if you've fallen in love
fallen in love with me
but any tie of endurance write off
I'm not that kind of guy, you see
to get it on for a night or two
that's quite alright with me
but any tie of endurance write off
I'm not that kind of guy, you see
So far, it's only a chorus. I'm going to call the song "I'm not that kind of guy" because I like the idea to sing just the opposite of what one might expect. As for the steps until completion refer to my blog "lyrics in progress", once I've finished the lyrics I will post it right here. Ideas, opinions, or contributions are welcome. |
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elex
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| Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 11:30 pm |
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So far it's a good composition of chorus just continue it.. Good luck! |
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texter-bernd
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| Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 6:27 am |
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I've been busy rhyming. The structure of the song will become verse-verse-chorus-verse-chorus-bridge-chorus. Here are my verses (the bridge is still missing). Here and there the intonation is a little off, but that should be acceptable - it's a fun song anyway, nothing too serious:
when we met it was quite plain
that we both could not abstain
it was a question of "your place or mine"
it was alright to meet again
that our relation we'd maintain
having sex - with a bottle of wine
now don't you start getting ideas
- and nurturing my fears
throwing off - the balance of our deal
if you want to persevere
this must not become sincere
I'm suspecting - what could be your zeal
don't talk 'bout kids or family
if you want to keep seein' me
the only way is to keep up our affair
would you listen to my plea
that I need to remain free
that doesn't mean - that I do not care |
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texter-bernd
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| Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 6:57 am |
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I've come up with a bridge, so the song is finished - i.e. its lyrics are:
when we met it was quite plain
that we both could not abstain
it was a question of "your place or mine"
it was alright to meet again
that our relation we'd maintain
having sex - with a bottle of wine
now don't you start getting ideas
- and nurturing my fears
throwing off - the balance of our deal
if you want to persevere
this must not become sincere
I'm suspecting - what could be your zeal
well, it's okay if you've fallen in love
fallen in love with me
but any tie of endurance write off
I'm not that kind of guy, you see
to get it on for a night or two
that's quite alright with me
but any tie of endurance write off
I'm not that kind of guy, you see
don't talk 'bout kids or family
if you want to keep seein' me
the only way is to keep up our affair
would you listen to my plea
that I need to remain free
that doesn't mean - that I do not care
well, it's okay if you've fallen in love ...
don't get my back against the wall
I need some space to breathe and roam
do understand I'm not your thrall
I'm not the man who'd stay at home
well, it's okay if you've fallen in love ... |
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