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tfsmudge
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| Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 8:27 am |
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PPB
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| Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 3:58 am |
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You start the song not well, too suddently, you should get so fast time for first sec intro, intrumental electronica again, i recognise zit in it.
you should try to play the bass at octave 3 - 2 too.
I'm more satitisfied at around 2:00
the breaks with these syn pads is very nice, your bass is not very well choosed for electronica, have to be more clear and dry, try to make some wav of ticks with percussion because they can be more heavy at some patterns...
This is not really indoor solid track but this would be perfect for some kinds of show live.
Or if i was in a room with lot of modern paintures and that this kind of music was in light background i would really like that.
But for listening to groove at home this is not kind of stuff i like.
Very ambient and so much that it's not really song but more piece of music for some shows or meditation trip experiences...doesn't have the features of song but more experimental/ambient/bit of groove.
It's good you seems to be original and explore sound athmosphere, you may become a good artist but only if you learn really producing seriously.
Experimenting alone is not enought man at your point. |
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tfsmudge
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| Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 5:05 am |
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Zit is certainly in there! Good observations, interesting your comments on the bass, if you check out Ennio Morricone's 'The Thing' Theme tune you'll see where this is coming from, but points taken... Thanks for the production advice, but bear in mind – to me a piece of music can also be over-produced, I can't have that... And question: Who's alone man?
Thanks once again for your review PPB – it's much appreciated.
Terry – A Zit From Acne |
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PPB
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| Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:53 pm |
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alone ? everybody ! and nobody can do it unless he find the light by dying          
beeing alone is all in the mind, but i do my music alone at home but collaborate with a lot of artists as you can see these angels in the ubw charts...they are all friends of me 
i'm sorry if you get offensed, i just mean this would be good if everybody had a person that is a real pro to advice and learn to him / her music knowledges...
i can say you know music, but you need pro producer lesson now....like me dude ....
be well ! |
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tfsmudge
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| Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 5:22 pm |
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Your views are important, and respected, whether I'm offended or not. That's the beauty of music, every one to their own I say! Keep reviewing PPB...
Terry - A Zit From Acne |
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PPB
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| Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 3:43 am |
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my goal by reviewing is sharing with peoples and perhaps together all we can enhance our music.
i must say it's very difficult to take advantages of reviews most of them are often appreciated with fallacy.
we always to keep in mind who is the person reviewing and if we can listen his music a bit to see where come from its opinion.
In my vision review by people who don't make music are often best indicator of popularity than review by people making music and beeing always rought when style doesn't please them.
Here what i do i made a lot of free band on ubw with different name and they are no "ppb" band, i just have to watch the charts of ubw and i can say easyly what song i did is good or not...because people like it or not...that can get some meanings, in others we can always trip our personal demo that make us freak because of our very personal needs for fun and perhaps ego...not always a bad thing, i'm still experimenting 1/2 song i make and 2/3 songs i make are real noise soup....
Same in life than music, many peoples are alone with theirs problems and/cause we are 8 000 000 000 on this planet...
Really my goal was not to put you down and more i'm making music, more i realise i'm bad with it...
One day an artist i buyed a cd on the net seemed to be despited about his work and i had not beated him yet.
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tfsmudge
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| Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 5:00 am |
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You've got a couple of good sayings in your last review, 'noise soup' and 'cubic mind shifting' which prove a point really, they're just as good to one person as they are crap to another! I'm feeling the vibe PPB and having heard your stuff and not wanting this to turn into the 'Monty Python: Dirty Fork Sketch' I think I'll end it with... 'Respect!'.
Terru - A Zit From Acne |
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PPB
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| Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 3:31 pm |
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yes respect is the best we can do first on here on forums if we want not our spoken to become sick crapheads theories...
this is enought then with this post and i say respect to you for you serious and peace for your inspiration.
Cheers man, hoping to listen new songs again from you on here. |
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