Havn't posted in a bit... here's the latest-Black Day Burnin

Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 9:02 pm

Sorry, i haven't been on in a bit, but here is the latest that i've got to work on, just finished up a few minutes ago... let me know what you think... all input is welcome, and appriciated!

Thanks

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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:11 pm

thanks for all the input... lol... not!

Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 12:22 am

welcome back dude!

not sure if you noticed, but you have a lot of popping at the beginning of the track. it seems to disappear when the vocals and drums kick in. the reverb on the drums seems pretty wet and they are pretty low in the mix in my opinion. what i really noticed the absence of was the kick. i know it's there, but there's not much punch to it. it might be partly due to the way drums seem to bleed and be absorbed by the rest of the track. the guitar also seems a little on the thin side like you were perhaps battling with getting a strong signal.

i really like the bass in this song and thought it pretty much drove it. it is also a good bass guitar sound. i also heard a few pops and crackles at the end of the track. it might be from the compression process or maybe deleting it and uploading it again will do the trick. hard to say, unless you can find it in the source track.

take it easy and best of luck to you! Cool

Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 1:30 pm

thanks for the input.... the pops... i can hear them, but i cant find them.. they don't seemto show up visually in my wavs i can hear the tracks they are on, but... hmm.. have to work on that somemore... i liked the bass on this track as well, thanx...let me see if i can fatten up some of the guitars..

moderator Joined: Jun 30, 2007 Posts: 567

Nice track, seems there is a bit of noise in the records this is the main problem with it.
I like the athmosphere with that song, came from another age of the past...dreamy guitars, always liked distant style with guitars Cool

singer is good but i'd like a bit more clear and affirmated sound, this is personal as the vocal track are really correct.
You may try to find a better end for you song cause it give the feeling it stop suddently with that chord and nothing else.
Stay in Razz

ubw rookie Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 147

I think the clicks at the beginning are digital misses during cd burning. Another burn on a different disc (better a different brand) should fix the problem. I like the song but would like something to break it up on the chorus. Also I believe there's a tad over compression on the finale mix. Good song!

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:26 pm

thanks for the input, i believe i have traced down the problem with the pops/clicks, it apears that my house is very old, and when the heat turns on it drops the power a bit, therefore giving me a click..... that's my story and im sticking to it.. lol.... i think that is it, either that or my pc is a pos.... haha... thanks again for the input.... i really like this song, my re-record that vox tracks, and see if i can clear them up a bit...

Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:14 am

Thanks everyone for all the listens... and thank you for the reviews....
cd

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 6:11 pm

thanks again for the input, a new song is on the way! recording vox tonight....

moderator Joined: Jun 30, 2007 Posts: 567

you can add link here or else and i will review it.
cheers and never let down with this Smile

Havn't posted in a bit... here's the latest-Black Day Burnin

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