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vidyps79
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Joined: Oct 21, 2008
Location: Belgrade, Serbia
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| Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 6:21 am |
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"To A Beauty" - A simple ode to beauty and love itself. This is not an instrumental one, rather an ambient one and I find it very nice. Take a listen and post me your feedbacks!
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jwhitted
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Joined: Nov 14, 2008
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| Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 2:10 pm |
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Let me preface this by saying this is not my kind of music at all. I'm pretty unfamiliar with the genre and have little to compare it to.
Having said that, I liked the underlying melodies a lot, especially the arpeggios that come in around the 1:28 mark. Song seemed to build without getting repetitive, which seems like a common flaw in this kind of music (again remembering my exposure is limited.)
The delay on the vocal part seemed way over the top to me and distracted me through the whole song. Couldn't understand the lyrics and thought it did nothing to support the main melody of the song. That's where I'd focus any changes. |
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vidyps79
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Location: Belgrade, Serbia
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| Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 7:07 pm |
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Excellent remarks. You see, I made a stereo voice, and it does sound less understandable. Now I changed it to mono, it sounds a bit less interesting, but I find it a pity not to understand the words, 'cos they're following the music completely. |
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