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dj_mansiz
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Joined: Oct 16, 2008
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| Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 8:21 pm |
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PPB
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Joined: Jun 30, 2007
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| Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 2:40 pm |
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this begin like a age of empire II track, you seem to introduce some tech elements after, you done a very weird song man, the melodic move with leads is not bad, you should work more on song structure purpose, you seem to have ideas you need to work on how to apply it in a song, try to focus on some elements a whole song long, and just build more your page, there is no graphics too bad 
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gorgatron
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Joined: Aug 08, 2006
Location: Greater Kansas City
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| Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 9:59 pm |
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lol @ age of empire 2 reference! yeah, the beginning does sort of have that feel.
the song's build is interesting for sure. the drums could be a bit beefier in places where the song really starts to move. as the song develops, i think some of the stops cause the track to loose its momentum and some of your transitions could be a little smoother. smoother transitions would help keep the track moving along and add some cohesion that this track seems to lack at times. definitely unique, though. thanks for sharing and good luck!  |
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dj_mansiz
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Joined: Oct 16, 2008
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| Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 4:58 pm |
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Thanks guys...You both have been very helpful....very constructive feedback....I will consider your suggestions....thanks again... |
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