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rtd
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Joined: Oct 12, 2008
Posts: 3
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 8:25 am |
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Hi guys,
Just joined the forum and it looks fairly awesome! About to go and have a proper dig now =) but figured i'd post this first hehe.
Just finished the mix on the first song of a new album.
Was hopeing you could take a listen and offer any advice or anything?
www.reverbnation.com/rtdestruction
www.myspace.com/rtdestruction
(only song on there!)
thanks in advance!
Luke  |
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Seneki
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Joined: Oct 21, 2004
Location: Sydney, Australia
Posts: 643
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 1:26 am |
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I like the flange on the quiet bits.
I found the snare a bit too regular throughout the rest,
but overall the song was still quite interesting. |
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Trentham
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Joined: Jun 29, 2008
Posts: 26
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 12:03 pm |
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Hi Luke,
I like the sound of this song - but I wonder whether you really need to wait a full minute of intro before it starts - at 2.25 the song drops back to the intro sequence - so you wouldn't lose anything by hacking off the first minute.
I don't like the swearing much - not because I'm old fashioned - but mainly because your singing voice doesn't suggest that you swear all the time! It sounds a bit forced - for effect.
The overall effect for me is that the song is being slightly forced out - it's good - but I think there's room to back off a bit and make the lyrics do more work.
Good luck with it.
Paul |
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gunner
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Joined: Jan 30, 2004
Location: Planet Earth
Posts: 772
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:07 pm |
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I agree with trentham, intro is way too long...i found myself wondering off and waiting for something to happen...but dont let that get ya down bud, the overall track was good enough in my book! |
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