gorgatron
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Joined: Aug 08, 2006
Location: Greater Kansas City
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| Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:07 pm |
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interesting intro. really simple, but fits really well. like the spacing. i still hear some of the issues i heard in the last track, but this recording is better than the last one. there are still some issues with levels peaking, but i'm not hearing that pop all the time. just in a few places on the guitar track and due to a couple of plosives on the vocal track. the guitar also still sounds kind of brittle. not sure what you could do to warm things up a bit other than EQ. the recording and mix are quite a bit better than your first track, though, in my opinion. i also personally enjoyed this track more. well written tune. good work and best of luck to you!  |
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