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jessehoff
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Joined: Sep 11, 2008
Location: fairbanks, ak
Posts: 2
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| Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 2:45 pm |
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Hi there,
I wanted to get some feedback about some of the songs I've been writing. I'll appreciate any comments that come to mind. I'd really like to know how the song makes you feel....Also feel free to comment on anything that you think I could do to make it better (i.e. instrumentation, tempo, key......) I really want to know too if you'd listen to the song again, and if so or not why??
www.myspace.com/jessekhoff
Thanks,
Jesse Hoff |
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PLAN_A
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Joined: Aug 22, 2008
Posts: 25
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| Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2008 8:45 am |
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Hey man, I saw almost 40 views, but no replies, I figured I would give it a listen. I gotta say, not bad for first recordings. The songs are pretty well structured, and there's plenty of catchy rhythm, melody and interesting instrument parts, particularly the piano. Your voice is pretty good, but is out of tune on some notes. Practice makes perfect man. If this is really first recordings, then keep at it. I think you'll have a nicely polished sound very soon.
-A |
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PPB
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Joined: Jun 30, 2007
Posts: 565
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| Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 5:16 am |
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"no tomorrow"
your song is nice, but need more delay and wet sphere, it sound too dry too me.
Anyways this is yet pretty good stuff ! |
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dsholdaway
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Joined: Oct 26, 2008
Posts: 1
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| Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 1:18 pm |
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No tomorow was sweet man! keep up the good work |
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hurleyac
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Joined: Oct 31, 2008
Location: London, UK
Posts: 4
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| Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 7:17 am |
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pretty cool man, keep it up |
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silverjess
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Joined: Nov 12, 2008
Posts: 2
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| Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 12:15 pm |
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For 1st time recordings, I thought they were well done! Did you record at a studio or at home?? |
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