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thepaddylad
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Joined: Aug 05, 2008
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 2:21 am |
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yo my UBW buddies.
muchas gracias for your reviews on time.
it was fabulous.
now i am going to annoy you again.
Runaway is the name of my next song.
It's been up here for a while,
but i'd love to hear your thoughts.
Danke schon. |
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PPB
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Joined: Jun 30, 2007
Posts: 567
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 9:30 am |
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Drums are tight, the sub is excellent (strong however)
Guitar is dancing around the voice, good harsch with high band for the vocal, you really got a phat and dynamic soundform.
Vocal are cool man, i can clearly understand it, a journey into feelings, i like the instru/breaks...
My only issue will be that you just fade the end...so no end...this is bad 
lol
this is great man  |
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Smileygeezer
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Joined: Jul 12, 2008
Location: Rochester, Kent, England
Posts: 46
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:55 am |
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Another very nice song. Can't fault the composition or indeed the performance.
The production is generaly very good too. I would personaly have a bit of a play with the EQ. Some of the high frequencies are making it sound a little hissy.
As for the ending, I am not against fading out. I do that on some of my songs. I wonder how it would sound, if you removed all the backing instruments and delivered the last line as an accapella with a bit of reverb? Just a thought. |
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thepaddylad
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Joined: Aug 05, 2008
Posts: 28
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:09 am |
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gracias amigos.
what i need is a production engineer who can do all this for me with the eq's and all that jazz.
ppb i know you don't like the slide. i'm sorry.
i have tried alternative endings, but i've found the slide works best for me.
thanks for the ideas smiley. |
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PPB
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Joined: Jun 30, 2007
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 11:17 am |
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hmmmmffff !!!!!!!!!!!!!
at least add a bit delay touch in addition on the end of the slide !!!!!!
lol |
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thepaddylad
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Joined: Aug 05, 2008
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:58 pm |
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PPB
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| Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:13 pm |
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run this is the last mile away !  |
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CriticalDown
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Joined: Aug 09, 2008
Location: azle, Texas
Posts: 65
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| Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 11:51 am |
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This is pretty tight!....i like it....the delay/reverb on the vox sounds a bit akward to me....try something for vocal pops... sounds great though, great tune! |
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thepaddylad
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Joined: Aug 05, 2008
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| Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 12:06 pm |
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cheers critic! i do need to rerecord the vocals anyway.
so i think that i shall try some different effects.
gracias.
tc//Px |
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