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Smileygeezer
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Joined: Jul 12, 2008
Location: Rochester, Kent, England
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| Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:31 am |
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Hi
Of all my songs, this one has provoked the mosty interest. I have re-done the vocals at Meadowfield Studios and generally improved the whole thing. What do you think?
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PPB
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Joined: Jun 30, 2007
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| Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 6:25 am |
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Very clean sound signal, very balanced, echoes are fine, lyrics are good, just it need more punch, stronger chords, the song flow and there is no strong build up, the solo guitar is a good idea, i suggest you add some patterns to the song with strong musical instru build up .. voice is very beautiful  |
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Smileygeezer
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Joined: Jul 12, 2008
Location: Rochester, Kent, England
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| Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:24 pm |
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Thanks PPB. I agree with you. What it really needs, is someone with a powerful voice, which alas is not me, to sing it. Robert Plant would make a good job of it. Wonder if he's busy.
If any of you vocalists out there can do power and emotion, get in touch. |
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thepaddylad
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Joined: Aug 05, 2008
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| Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:14 am |
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i think its deep.
not typically my type of music, but i was intrigued by a very pure sound.
i did like it. i think perhaps maybe a bit more of an intro would be great,
sort of set the tone and bring us in. but that's a minor thing and only
my opinion. i think its great man.
again i like the depth and the obvious thought behind the lyrics/song.
don't beat yourself up over the vocals. i think they're so pure. they add originality.
tc//Px |
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