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BEBE
ubw newbie
Joined: Nov 19, 2004
Posts: 46
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| Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:00 am |
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Can you hear me
When I call your name
Can you hear me
Before I go insane
Think I love you
I really do
Could you love me
Could you love me too
Please answer my prayer my darling one
Please answer my prayer you are the one
Can you see me
I'm standing here
Can you see me
Wanting you dear
Think I love you
I really do
Could you love me
Could you love me too
Please answer my prayer my darling one
Please answer my prayer you are the one
These are just the opening lyrics for a new song. Need to work on it |
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PPB
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Joined: Jun 30, 2007
Posts: 333
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| Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 12:32 am |
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well writted but i have no idea without notes what i could make for a song, bit ² optimistic to my taste but feel good to me...prayer for love just seems me weird as i don't really realise really this feeling entirely in my life...i can say i had some pleasure reading your words however...
cheers |
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BEBE
ubw newbie
Joined: Nov 19, 2004
Posts: 46
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| Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 9:25 am |
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Thanks PPB for your comments BEBE x |
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