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jivistheshizz
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Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 8:57 pm Reply with quote

in my songs i write the lyrics but i think there kind of cheezy but there what im feeling and what im really going through in my life. i need some opinions and help if necesary. let me know what you think!

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gunner
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Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:50 pm Reply with quote

Whats up???...im right next door in Ferndale, damn someone else from the Detroit area yea!!!
Liked the white Boy rap.....
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jivistheshizz
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 6:42 pm Reply with quote

REALLY THATS SO TIGHT, HAHAHA YOU LIKED IT!
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gorgatron
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 9:45 pm Reply with quote

that's funny. geeky and funny. Laughing
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Famousface
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 2:49 pm Reply with quote

I like your song 1 years. It's pretty great.
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jackrockson
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:01 pm Reply with quote

i like the Just Too Late song and 10 Years Cool
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lacyloves
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 4:11 pm Reply with quote

1 years is great
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elex
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Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 12:37 am Reply with quote

I like you song too. really nice..
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texter-bernd
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Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 10:28 am Reply with quote

what exactly is there to like?

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