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FaceFitz
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| Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 2:12 am |
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Hey Guys...
New tune up for your critique / enjoyment,
Here's the link..
Phone Me An Ambilence...
its up at 320kbs (best qulity mp3)
for free downloads of any of my songs visit my solo page (link below)
Happy Listening... FACE |
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FaceFitz
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 7:09 am |
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erm, ill start then....lmao... the mix has too much high end, giving the tune an unwanted 'metalic sound'... hahahaha.... |
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NekoNeko
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 7:20 am |
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Good tune. I agree with you on the high end being a little brittle and harsh. Also you low mids are a bit muddy which with the hrash high end leaves the track sounding a bit hollow. Besides this i really like the drums esspecially the lofi delay on the snare. Good work, keep it up and it'll get better.
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FaceFitz
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 7:24 am |
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yea mate , first of all thanks again for the review, i think the snare drums come through really dull, i ruined this tune mastering it, gonna go back to the source file and do it again i think... when i first did it it sounded really smooth, so ive nmessed something up...lol... cheers for listening mate...  |
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NekoNeko
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 7:35 am |
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No worries at all, I look forward to hearing the finished version. I know how you feel, music is a lot of trial and error and mistakes have to be made in order to learn. |
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FaceFitz
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 7:36 am |
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oh yea,is it!!! lmao... nice one mate... |
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PPB
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 9:59 am |
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hey good , make me think a bit to the soundform i'm working into these times, i mean about phat...pads cuttof is to low or bypass saw or at least set less resolution, this hurt man, a mess side to the global quality of the song that is giving me strong reflexion moods...active chill ! |
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gunner
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| Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 5:35 pm |
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Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your High End is too high.....Your Low End is too low...and your mids are midway!!!! oh no....what shall you ever do???!!!!
hahahaaaa........
im back!!!....i was just kidding man....how ya been??
track sounds nice man....i dont what all this talk about highs and mids but on my cheap ass speakers it sounds pretty good!!
Keep em comin FaceFlippy (LOL)
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PPB
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| Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 6:16 am |
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now we all undestand why gunner calls gunner lol |
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gorgatron
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| Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 10:22 pm |
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hey, i already know this one!!! i'll have to listen to it again to remember if it's the really good one, or the really crappy one.  |
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PPB
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| Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 10:28 pm |
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all of us have do crap tracks, i have listened some unrealed track by jean michel jarre when he was not yet known by the public, they are more clever than mine but totally flat and cold...never he would like mtv cast them on the tv...but i have the idea if i've been able to download it (and deleted it like a morrow) it's because he'd just have the idea there is an interest some peoples and fans listen to it...BLAH ! lol |
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FaceFitz
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| Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:52 am |
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| gunner wrote: | Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your High End is too high.....Your Low End is too low...and your mids are midway!!!! oh no....what shall you ever do???!!!!
hahahaaaa........
im back!!!....i was just kidding man....how ya been??
track sounds nice man....i dont what all this talk about highs and mids but on my cheap ass speakers it sounds pretty good!!
Keep em comin FaceFlippy (LOL)
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HEEEEEEEEY... I remember that guy.... lol... where you been man, your as illusive as santa!! lmao... glad you liked the tune mate, nice to hear from you...lol.. yea, its all getting a bit high end this, low end that here...lol.. but that must mean the composition it self is ok at least, i knew it wasnt right when i up'd it but im on 3 tunes at the moment and just had a massive downpour of work come in, im off sat/sun though... so ill pop on here n see what you've all been jabbering about!!!
later man... |
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FaceFitz
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| Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:54 am |
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| gorgatron wrote: | | hey, i already know this one!!! i'll have to listen to it again to remember if it's the really good one, or the really crappy one. |
hahahaha, do one ya back boiler engineer!!!  |
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FaceFitz
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| Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:57 am |
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| PPB wrote: | | all of us have do crap tracks, i have listened some unrealed track by jean michel jarre when he was not yet known by the public, they are more clever than mine but totally flat and cold...never he would like mtv cast them on the tv...but i have the idea if i've been able to download it (and deleted it like a morrow) it's because he'd just have the idea there is an interest some peoples and fans listen to it...BLAH ! lol |
yea man, so there gorgatron!! ppb's got my back...lol.. call one of my tunes crap again and ill send him round your house and he'll beat you up with his headphones man...lol...
cheers for the comments guys... have fun!! |
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gunner
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| Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:02 pm |
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Yep...ive been real busy.....havent had much time for me lately...but it looks like work will be slowing down real soon and i can get back to all my friends here at UBW....i miss all the smartass quips and such....lol...hell, ive even learned a few! thanks fellas....anyhow....talk to ya guys real soon!!
GG |
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