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lociano
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Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 8:24 pm Reply with quote

Sup y'all,

when you get a quick moment peep my new song: Heavy Internal Pain
at: http://www.mediamax.com/lociano/Hosted/Heavy%20Internal%20Pain.mp3

Lemme know what you think - good or bad.. I'd rather hear criticism than hear nothin at all.. it's all good either way..

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FaceFitz
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Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:28 am Reply with quote

HAHA, yea, i like it,well made song, nice riff, quite a unique sound, some nice sampling, quite a nice quirky feel throughout, im not a rap rap fan, but you bought a smile to my face with this one... i hope thats what you are going for, lol, some bits sound serious, some bits are comical, anyways, i enjoyed the tune overall... nice job... Cool
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lociano
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Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:58 pm Reply with quote

thanks for the comments man.. you hit the nail right on the head when you said "some bits sound serious, some bits are comical" - 9 times outta 10 there will be sarcastic-humor in my lyrics.. haha.. takes the edge off, ya know.. lol..
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gorgatron
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Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 6:14 pm Reply with quote

the feel and flow are pretty old school for sure. way minimal on the soundtrack. you talk about killin', stabbing, dismembering, and such like. lot of it is pretty aggressive. i'm also not the biggest fan of the oft reoccurring 'best MC' theme that has a long tradition in genre.

the recording itself is pretty good. like facefitz pointed out, there are some cool samples. there's something about the vocal mix that doesn't sit right with me, but i'm not sure if i can correctly articulate it.

really good effort, though. keep 'em coming. Cool
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lociano
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 3:19 pm Reply with quote

thanx man.. a critical review but not in a distasteful way.. not just stating your opinion - but elaborating on it.. maybe next time i'll get every aspect of the track to bang for ya..
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