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ItsYoungD
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 5:18 pm |
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smili
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 8:58 pm |
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Cool sound. I'm not a rap guy (so what would I know about the sound you're going for?), but from an artistic standpoint I'd find it very interesting if you brought in a good rock guitarist and recorded this with live guitar. There's a definitely a cool rock groove in there, but instead of the sampled guitar groove I think it could go to another level with a live guitar part behind you.
And I do think you should go for a rock guitarist - not a non-rock guitarist who is trying to sound like a rock guitarist. Some dude who's into stuff like Metallica or Korn could have some fun with what you've got going on behind the rap...
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ItsYoungD
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| Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:40 pm |
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| smili wrote: | Cool sound. I'm not a rap guy (so what would I know about the sound you're going for?), but from an artistic standpoint I'd find it very interesting if you brought in a good rock guitarist and recorded this with live guitar. There's a definitely a cool rock groove in there, but instead of the sampled guitar groove I think it could go to another level with a live guitar part behind you.
And I do think you should go for a rock guitarist - not a non-rock guitarist who is trying to sound like a rock guitarist. Some dude who's into stuff like Metallica or Korn could have some fun with what you've got going on behind the rap...
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Thanks alot for the response. i really appreciate it I have been looking for people to review this song and give me some feedback. i have a show march 8th and ive found a guy who can play this actuall groove thats being played on the guitar in the beat. also a band whos going to add a nice set of drums to the stage performance so it should make for a good on stage show  . I made this song because i know how much people are getting tired of hearing the same everyday rap thats played on the radio |
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PPB
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| Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 3:18 pm |
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nice effort but u really need bacic delays/phat and lowpass filters mastering especially about vocal tracks...singer is good but mastering of the track is dull, intrumentalistion is okay however it's mixed too low |
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ItsYoungD
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| Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:36 pm |
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| PPB wrote: | | nice effort but u really need bacic delays/phat and lowpass filters mastering especially about vocal tracks...singer is good but mastering of the track is dull, intrumentalistion is okay however it's mixed too low |
thanks for the advice i will do that  |
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FaceFitz
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| Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 9:14 am |
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Nice, Nice effort... good flow and nice guitar, makes the track really stand out and come to life... i too am not a rap guy, but youve got a good tune there guys.... nice work, keep it up...  |
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ItsYoungD
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| Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:26 am |
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| FaceFitz wrote: | | Nice, Nice effort... good flow and nice guitar, makes the track really stand out and come to life... i too am not a rap guy, but youve got a good tune there guys.... nice work, keep it up... |
thanks alot for the comment and review!  |
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