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Bullet41
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 2:45 pm Reply with quote

"it seems habits can be the cause of your problem"

This habit is like an hearthache
and i cant seem to stop it
this habit made me lose all faith
on curing it
but today am braking the habit
TONIGHT

This habbit is like an evil sprit
and am braking it
TONIGHT

i seem so assame
i dont want to be the one who gets the blame
"On everyones shame"
if you only were me
you would understand
my meserry

Go away i dont need you
go away my life is much better with out you
you invaded my body like an parrasite
but am braking this habbit TONIGHT

This habbit is like an evil sprit
and am braking it
TONIGHT
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En-En
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 2:49 pm Reply with quote

phh it's aait man...but too sort plus i don't real got dis subject homy...
keep ya had up it's aait

PIS

INDEFINITE
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hereafter
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 11:08 pm Reply with quote

Do you listen to linkin park alot by anychance, because when I was reading this thats the first thing that came into my mind. you also use the same title as one of their songs and teh line "Im breaking the habit, Tonight" is directly from that song.
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RiCterMan
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 11:37 pm Reply with quote

Hey man,

Before I even read hereafter's reply, I too was already thinking about telling you that linkin park has a song called, "Breaking the Habit", as well. But, if you feel that your song is good enough, that if it were heard by others, they could care less about the title, then I'd keep it the way it is. Also, if it would satisfy you more, to have your song be unique to any other, I'd definitely change it in that case.

However, that one part is very, very similar to linkin park's lyric, but I have to point out that it is worded differently. If it was just a coincidencidental occurence, and you weren't trying to paraphrase what Chester Bennington wrote, than I wouldn't change it just because of that. Although, without the word "today" in front of the rest of the words, it would be exactly the same. You might want to think about re-wording it for that reason, while at the same time, keeping the meaning the same, as you have it there already.

hereafter: Just in case that seemed offensive, please know that the last point I made wasn't intending to start any trouble between you and I. I'm totally cool with you, man. Wink

Cheers, you guys!

RiCterMan
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hereafter
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 12:40 am Reply with quote

hey man, Im never offended by anything you say, your too nice. Im totaly cool with you too.
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