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Bullet41
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 7:45 am Reply with quote

Am i a kid
or am i just a boy

People making fun of me
i take everything personaly
is my life based on a insect
because i fell so perfect
people calling me a bodrick
you mpeople should suck my dick
you think your so hard
but your all scared of the dark

what am i to myself
i dont think fit in with anyone else
i dont fell like a human i dont fell like a reject
i just fell like an insect

i look small
am nearly as small as a volly ball
i broke my neck
just to try to prove am not an insect
tornados have no effect on me
its like i was born perfectly
people think they know me
"but how could you know me when i dont know myself?"

what am i to myself
i dont fit in with anyone else
i dont fell ike a human i dont feel like a reject
i just feel like an insect

am i a insect
or am i just a boy

what am i to myself
i dont fit in with anyone else
i dont feel like a human i dont feel like a reject
i just feel like a human

writen by bullet 41
from his band x-unit
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3732

Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 12:53 pm Reply with quote

Very interesting lyrics!! I like lots of it, and I don't like some if.

I like the way you combine unlke things from verse to verse, that always gets me interested, for example:

Quote:
i look small
am nearly as small as a volly ball
i broke my neck
just to try to prove am not an insect


I think that's an interesting line.

I have a tough time with literal references sometimes when they seem out of context... For example:

Quote:
people calling me a bodrick
you mpeople should suck my dick


I just don't think that works there.

Anyways, thanks for sharing, YOU'VE been BUSY!!!!!

Hopefully I'll get caught up soon!!!
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Bullet41
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 1:06 pm Reply with quote

read pt2 of insect its alot better and dont forget to read memorys from the past ,demolition lovers, tell that chris i know where he lives ,Brother and the king of darkness
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RiCterMan
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Location: Madison, OH
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 8:33 pm Reply with quote

I have to say, Bullet..., This is really good, but in my opinion, it's not your best.

However, I dealt with this probably growing up, while in school. The morons I went to school with seemed to think I was a homosexual, because I'm more feminine than most guys. I'm not incredibly feminine, to the point where I act like a girl, or talk like some of them do. It basically pertains to how emotional I can get, and my sensitivity. I used to let all my emotions out, including the expression of caring feelings for my friends, girls and guys. So, I guess I can understand how it looked the way it did. I've also been very sensitive, as compared to most guys, for the majority of my lifespan (so far). I think the reason for how I unintentionally portrayed myself, is that I grew up with two younger sisters, and no older "role model-type" brother. I'm thinking it's possible that sometimes, when a young boy grows up in that kind of situation, the outcome can show through in their personality traits.

My point is, I got made fun of (and more) everyday, to the point where when I'd get home from school, I'd pretty much go to my room and cry. I could say more about this, but I don't care much about it anymore, because it's in the past.

Good Job, even though I've liked some of your past works more. This is still a job well done. Cheers, to you, and a quirky little thumbs up! (um, don't ask why... Laughing )

RiCterMan
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