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50pence
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Joined: Jun 03, 2005
Location: UK, England
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2005 11:49 am Reply with quote

Got an ex-boyfrind {ex-boyfriend}
who calls me late at night
all he wants to do {babababa} is blame me for his life
i date a stupid jerk who forgets my name
he goes out all night it drives me insane

Chorus
lucky me, its lucky me, always lucky ..


ok so i made this bit up, any one got any suggestions to add to the song ? Cool
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 9:07 pm Reply with quote

lol..

sounds like a cool punk rock song already... cool lyrics!
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Bullet41
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Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Bracknell
Posts: 120

Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 7:32 am Reply with quote

Your music is patheticly shit go back to song writing school please for the children.

Just joking its not bad its just u need to make it more exciting its a bit too simple and try to put more effort in your songs.

PS:Just joking about the top bit lol
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