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Thekiks
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 7:55 am Reply with quote

Deluge

Iím standing at the cross roads
Last stop for the lost souls
Last stop for the mind
I've seen this hypocrite writ freak show
From the cheap seats on the backrow
Are we all just doing time?

Well the pressures mounting up now
And the floods will not refrain
Cause I see the deluge is coming
So let it rain

The calm before the storm has broken
The last bitter words are spoken
See the cracks around my eyes
The words I used to paint a picture from
Now I seem to choke on
The sky is falling in my mind

Well the pressures mounting up now
And the dams about to brake
Well I see the deluge is coming
And not to late

Well you, you analyse my problems
And I wish that you could solve them
Well my muse is yours to loan
Yeah I know just what is comming
But you wont see me running
Iíll be waiting here alone

Well the pressures mounting up now
See the cracks around my head
Well I see the deluge is coming
Just like I said
Well I see the deluge is coming
Just like I said

Written by: Paul McGeachie & Reggie Bryant
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Brooksy
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 8:24 am Reply with quote

Hi guys....nice batch of lyric there.

Definitley feel a little anguish in there, along with a sudden urge to beat heads against the wall.

Very Happy

Stick it in my lyric crit guys...I'm in the mood after reading this. I loved it.
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Thekiks
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 8:39 am Reply with quote

Thanks Brooksy

I've added it to your lyric crit.

I will add the mp3 of the song to the site as soon as I can upgrade my membership.
For now there is a version of the song on our website at

http://www.freewebs.com/thekiks/index.htm
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 9:04 am Reply with quote

nice, diggin this one very much
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Thekiks
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 4:13 pm Reply with quote

Thanks, much appreciated
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 9:14 pm Reply with quote

Great job on the lyrics. They contain, in my opinion, a great balance between symbolism and literal feelings.

I really enjoyed reading these, nice job!!!

Ron
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Thekiks
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 8:23 am Reply with quote

Thanks Ron Very Happy
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