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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 8:08 pm |
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Bored outta my mind
Not even gonna try to figure out why.
What the hell is going on?
Why the hell am I alone?
I'm blacking out now- like going blind.
What the hell am I supposed to do this time?
My emotions feel canned.
Can't let them out- can't express
how I feel- my mind's being slammed.
It's almost like feeling lazy.
This mindfight's making me crazy.
Don't know how, don't know why.
Need to get myself out of this lie.
Feeling rather trapped and stuck
Like trying to run through soft muck.
Itching to fight, to go, to run
Away from here- have some fun.
You're my f**king problem this time.
My emotions feel canned.
Can't let them out- can't express
How I feel- my mind's being slammed.
It's almost like feeling lazy.
This mindfight's making me crazy.
Don't know how, don't know why.
Need to get myself out of this lie.
This place sucks- so damn bored.
I wanna go home but I'm already there.
Going psycho, borderline,
I'm my own f**king problem this time.
My emotions feel canned.
Can't let them out- can't express
How I feel- my mind's being slammed.
It's almost like feeling lazy.
This mindfight's making me crazy.
Don't know how, don't know why.
Need to get myself out of this lie. |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 10:18 pm |
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Won't be on all weekend- would really appreciate some feedback whilst I'm riding out Hurricane Rita.
Cheers- Anne |
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over-drive
ubw newbie
Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Rotherham
Posts: 30
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| Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 7:09 am |
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hey its me i like it, the The rhyming in it works nicely. its a good sounding song id love to here music to it. Good job i enjoyed it. hey look on page 5 of the fourms at the bottem there is another 1 of my songs could you have a look at it ta |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2005 2:22 pm |
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thanks for the review and comment! I'll definitely have to check your songs out.... |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 1:55 am |
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Hey. I hope you did ok during the storm. I follow that shit on TV, and that one was almost worse than Katrina, before it lost strength.
Anyway, this is a lyrics thread, so let me set that aside, and give you some feedback. I like how it's written. It's somewhat simple, but creative, and it looks like it would flow very well. I shall read more by you. Later! |
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deltarain
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 6:06 pm |
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Again, a bit off topic- we fared wonderfully during the storm- lost power early Saturday morning and got it back around 7:30 that night. Thanks for the review- this is probably my second favorite, bested by maybe Ecstasy. Hrmmmm... again, thanks! |
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