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| Topic: Wanted Man | |
| cprmark Replies: 0 Views: 1367 |
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| Streaks of light fill the sky. Blood runs down the walls.
Darkness is closing in. Can't you here them call? E ... |
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| Topic: Blame It On Me | |
| cprmark Replies: 0 Views: 936 |
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| This is a song about my first wife. Man are there alot of those |
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| Topic: Ten Lb Test "Alive" | |
| cprmark Replies: 2 Views: 1103 |
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| Thanks RiChterMan, I'll post more as time allows. I'm checking out some of yours by the way, they're great. | |
| Topic: "The Cavern of Lost Emeralds" | |
| cprmark Replies: 3 Views: 944 |
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| Loved it. My favorite line is "A cold stone will plot against an emerald". It sent my mind racing ahead to the fact that, in time, no stone surrounding an emerald will be left. |
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| Topic: "Under Eyelids" | |
| cprmark Replies: 2 Views: 984 |
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| I think that even if you had not set it up, I'd still have felt a great emotional power in these lyrics. Nice Job Man. I'll definately read more of your stuff. I have a bit of a troubled spirit myself ... | |
| Topic: Ten Lb Test "Alive" | |
| cprmark Replies: 2 Views: 1103 |
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| Alive
I'm tired of lookin' from the outside. Now I'm ready to come in. I've been played with for the last time. Well I wont go back there again. All I ... |
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| Topic: Songs I wrote tell me what you think | |
| cprmark Replies: 1 Views: 1043 |
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| I had to read these lyrics a couple of times to catch the cadence, but when I did, I was moved by a story of true love, gone bitter. Any time you can make other people feel your emotion, as a writer, ... | |
| Topic: Carry On | |
| cprmark Replies: 1 Views: 984 |
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| I'm uploading this song now to the Ten Lb Test site. It's a little slower than what I usually do, but I guess we a have a softside. I thought the lyrics we're pretty good. | |
| Topic: Carry On | |
| cprmark Replies: 1 Views: 984 |
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| Carry On
When the party's over, She'll be the last one gone. Yeah she waves goodbye like she could have had some fun. ... |
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| Topic: Out of Time (song) | |
| cprmark Replies: 6 Views: 1379 |
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| I uploaded this song to our page today. Hope you guys like it. | |
| Topic: Out of Time (song) | |
| cprmark Replies: 6 Views: 1379 |
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| It's the simple things that never fade, But still we walk on a different stage, in a dying play. ... | |
| Topic: First Week | |
| cprmark Replies: 5 Views: 1616 |
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| Powerful words...This is a good discription of a rush of feelings most of us experience at least once. Thanks for sharing. | |
| Topic: Disappear. | |
| cprmark Replies: 7 Views: 1561 |
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| Great lyrics! They made me feel as if you know my pain. I believe many others would feel the same way. | |
| Topic: Final Song of Mother Earth | |
| cprmark Replies: 4 Views: 1601 |
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| Thanks everyone. Your replies are very encouraging. I'll post more as time allows. | |
| Topic: Lyrics for my Band Polyethylene | |
| cprmark Replies: 6 Views: 3826 |
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| I think the hooks could be stronger in all three. I thought the second one was the strongest. All of the lyrics flow well and you chose words well, but after reading them, I would have to hear them w ... | |
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