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| Topic: LYRICS: "Cosmica-Emotiona" | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 2 Views: 655 |
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| I don't think it matters how you write lyrics...there's probably always going to be a way to portray words in music.
i liked this one- it was very up-beat and...if i may say, strange. it reminded ... |
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| Topic: LYRICS: #1 hero | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 0 Views: 823 |
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| (ergh. I was f**king pissed when i wrote this.)
I am a murderer a masochist a maniac LOSER! You don't understand me, but we all see mirror images of ourselves in others. Maybe you don't u ... |
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| Topic: LYRICS: Tams Theme II | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 1 Views: 816 |
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| deep. and vulgar. They're great. | |
| Topic: Loners | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 2 Views: 881 |
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| (short lyrics....maybe i should keep adding? anyways,...this whole thing is a travesty of the reality of death and the diction implys the unserious mood of it all...or does it? Well, whatever.Thanks f ... | |
| Topic: L.O.L | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 1 Views: 811 |
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| It reads like a very energetic, fast song...i like it a lot.
it captures an angry/shocked emotion that's perfectly conveyed. |
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| Topic: (poem) Safe in White | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 1 Views: 821 |
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| My life is a detour from the "normal" light
in shades of blue confined astray from site. The world takes gestures personally wrong from the quiet-type nuisance who has learned little so long. ... |
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| Topic: Apogee - 'Here I Am' | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 6 Views: 1012 |
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| Oh my god, dude! Yes, you freaking rock! The singing is extrememely talented. I like the style of it too. (btw- i liked the drums in this song as well.) There's a mainstream potential to it. | |
| Topic: "When is it Time?" (Poetry) | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 9 Views: 986 |
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| I'm really shocked at your talent; your poetry is the type of style i admire. (i go to other poetry sites, and they all suck!)
Just out of curiosity, how long did it take you to write this? |
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| Topic: Ghost (poem) | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 2 Views: 845 |
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| Thanks for the feedback.
I'm doing okay now, my day wasn't very "good" though. ...I'll talk to you later, Rick. |
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| Topic: Untitled | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 6 Views: 815 |
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| That was great...at first i thought you were going to get cliche with the "hide and seek" idea...but everything sounded so good aloud when i read it. Great concept. Hope to see more like this. | |
| Topic: Apogee - 'Here I Am' | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 6 Views: 1012 |
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| That's a unique format, and i really like your work. I'll have to hear the song as well...it's very intriguing.
...so, overall you've done great. |
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| Topic: Ghost (poem) | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 2 Views: 845 |
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| Truth has been hidden behind tragic gazes,
a paradox mind and a twisted maze. But simple-minded and truthfully the same. no different from any other- just the sad face mirrors reflect what f ... |
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| Topic: "Sorry to Say" | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 2 Views: 859 |
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| But after long, I'd burn you out,
and it could easily take me too. that's interesting... and adequate is a very catchy word. Do you ever get burned out? All your ideas are different...it ac ... |
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| Topic: "Starlit Tomorrow" (poem) | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 5 Views: 842 |
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| Very uplifting!
Your poetry is so awesome....the rhymes are like...so good. I'm jealous...i'm so jealous, i don't think we can be friends anymore. I'm gonna be left in the shade now! no, j/k, b ... |
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| Topic: "Endurance" | |
| DamnaNefas Replies: 4 Views: 807 |
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| It's not like your old stuff...before i left. I can't say that i dislike this piece, but it doesn't flow as smoothly as a lot of the other lyrics you've written. Aside from that though, your message i ... | |
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