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  Topic: LYRICS: "Cosmica-Emotiona"
DamnaNefas

Replies: 2
Views: 655

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Mon Feb 06, 2006 7:56 pm   Subject: LYRICS: "Cosmica-Emotiona"
I don't think it matters how you write lyrics...there's probably always going to be a way to portray words in music.

i liked this one- it was very up-beat and...if i may say, strange. it reminded ...
  Topic: LYRICS: #1 hero
DamnaNefas

Replies: 0
Views: 823

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Mon Feb 06, 2006 7:50 pm   Subject: LYRICS: #1 hero
(ergh. I was f**king pissed when i wrote this.)


I am
a murderer
a masochist
a maniac
LOSER!
You don't understand me,
but we all see mirror images of ourselves
in others.
Maybe you don't u ...
  Topic: LYRICS: Tams Theme II
DamnaNefas

Replies: 1
Views: 816

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 10:04 pm   Subject: LYRICS: Tams Theme II
deep. and vulgar. They're great.
  Topic: Loners
DamnaNefas

Replies: 2
Views: 881

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 5:34 pm   Subject: Loners
(short lyrics....maybe i should keep adding? anyways,...this whole thing is a travesty of the reality of death and the diction implys the unserious mood of it all...or does it? Well, whatever.Thanks f ...
  Topic: L.O.L
DamnaNefas

Replies: 1
Views: 811

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 5:47 pm   Subject: L.O.L
It reads like a very energetic, fast song...i like it a lot.

it captures an angry/shocked emotion that's perfectly conveyed.
  Topic: (poem) Safe in White
DamnaNefas

Replies: 1
Views: 821

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 2:53 pm   Subject: (poem) Safe in White
My life is a detour from the "normal" light
in shades of blue confined astray from site.

The world takes gestures personally wrong
from the quiet-type nuisance who has learned little so long.

...
  Topic: Apogee - 'Here I Am'
DamnaNefas

Replies: 6
Views: 1012

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2006 5:28 pm   Subject: Apogee - 'Here I Am'
Oh my god, dude! Yes, you freaking rock! The singing is extrememely talented. I like the style of it too. (btw- i liked the drums in this song as well.) There's a mainstream potential to it.
  Topic: "When is it Time?" (Poetry)
DamnaNefas

Replies: 9
Views: 986

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 9:09 pm   Subject: "When is it Time?" (Poetry)
I'm really shocked at your talent; your poetry is the type of style i admire. (i go to other poetry sites, and they all suck!)

Just out of curiosity, how long did it take you to write this?
  Topic: Ghost (poem)
DamnaNefas

Replies: 2
Views: 845

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 9:06 pm   Subject: Ghost (poem)
Thanks for the feedback.

I'm doing okay now, my day wasn't very "good" though.
...I'll talk to you later, Rick.
  Topic: Untitled
DamnaNefas

Replies: 6
Views: 815

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 9:04 pm   Subject: Untitled
That was great...at first i thought you were going to get cliche with the "hide and seek" idea...but everything sounded so good aloud when i read it. Great concept. Hope to see more like this.
  Topic: Apogee - 'Here I Am'
DamnaNefas

Replies: 6
Views: 1012

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 5:30 pm   Subject: Apogee - 'Here I Am'
That's a unique format, and i really like your work. I'll have to hear the song as well...it's very intriguing.

...so, overall you've done great.
  Topic: Ghost (poem)
DamnaNefas

Replies: 2
Views: 845

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2006 5:25 pm   Subject: Ghost (poem)
Truth has been hidden behind tragic gazes,
a paradox mind and a twisted maze.


But simple-minded and truthfully the same.
no different from any other-
just the sad face mirrors reflect
what f ...
  Topic: "Sorry to Say"
DamnaNefas

Replies: 2
Views: 859

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 7:37 pm   Subject: "Sorry to Say"
But after long, I'd burn you out,
and it could easily take me too.

that's interesting...
and adequate is a very catchy word.

Do you ever get burned out? All your ideas are different...it ac ...
  Topic: "Starlit Tomorrow" (poem)
DamnaNefas

Replies: 5
Views: 842

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 7:33 pm   Subject: "Starlit Tomorrow" (poem)
Very uplifting!

Your poetry is so awesome....the rhymes are like...so good. I'm jealous...i'm so jealous, i don't think we can be friends anymore. I'm gonna be left in the shade now!

no, j/k, b ...
  Topic: "Endurance"
DamnaNefas

Replies: 4
Views: 807

PostForum: Lyrics   Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2006 7:28 pm   Subject: "Endurance"
It's not like your old stuff...before i left. I can't say that i dislike this piece, but it doesn't flow as smoothly as a lot of the other lyrics you've written. Aside from that though, your message i ...
 
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