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| Topic: Withdraw | |
| Aubrii Replies: 0 Views: 183 |
 Forum: Lyrics Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 9:27 pm Subject: Withdraw |
| Withdraw
Verse 1: patterns of denial projected on your face holding hope for a fair trial freedom gone without a trace taking every oath of silence lay your hand upon the book promise no ... |
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| Topic: Time - poem | |
| Aubrii Replies: 4 Views: 841 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 9:52 am Subject: re: Time - poem |
| actually it's all saying don't let time slip away.
The last bit "If you don't watch love you'll regret it hold your heart love and don't let it lead you to think that it's younger ... |
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| Topic: At first sight | |
| Aubrii Replies: 0 Views: 759 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:20 pm Subject: At first sight |
| Just a small poem/ part of a song...i've been singing it for a while now around the house. I'm trying to make it into a whole song but i donno, i kinda like it like this, as a poem.
At first sight ... |
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| Topic: stranger things - turn the page | |
| Aubrii Replies: 1 Views: 727 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 2:09 pm Subject: re: stranger things - turn the page |
i wish i could hear this song, unfortunatly my computer is stpid and won't let me listen to anything  The lyrics look good though. I only have one thing to critique. I don't know how it soun ... |
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| Topic: In Hope | |
| Aubrii Replies: 1 Views: 673 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 1:57 pm Subject: re: In Hope |
again, sweet  . I realy like the first stanza. keep it up
-Aubrii |
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| Topic: "Jump" by Shallow Palace Project | |
| Aubrii Replies: 5 Views: 1108 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 1:55 pm Subject: re: "Jump" by Shallow Palace Project |
| i wanna hear this song
-Aubrii |
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| Topic: totality engaged. | |
| Aubrii Replies: 1 Views: 776 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 1:54 pm Subject: re: totality engaged. |
| "You lay on your laurels and twisted my morals"
I love this line, not really sre why. Is this a song or a poem? The only thing i can tink of to correct would be that it sounds a little b ... |
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| Topic: If This Is Love | |
| Aubrii Replies: 14 Views: 1662 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 11:20 am Subject: re: If This Is Love |
| aw i like this poem, it's very sweet. It sems like it could easily be transitioned into a song too. Good work. My only suggestion is that you read through your posts and correct typing errors before ... | |
| Topic: Time - poem | |
| Aubrii Replies: 4 Views: 841 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 11:17 am Subject: Time - poem |
| Time Flys when you're not watching
grab time by the hand love and walk slowly get death off your mind love this is only the beginging of your intentions watch the clock love and intently ... |
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| Topic: what i want to hear. | |
| Aubrii Replies: 1 Views: 1015 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 12:02 pm Subject: re: what i want to hear. |
| Very nice, bit redundant, but its a song so its ok. I like this part:
"you're the blood clot in my brain. you're the poison in my veins" i donno why, i guess i just like the fact that ... |
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| Topic: Torn | |
| Aubrii Replies: 1 Views: 764 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 11:52 am Subject: re: Torn |
| Hi, welcome to UBW. I hope you have a good time on this site and you get a lot of feedback on your work. From what i can tell, you are a good writter you just need some guidence. I really like some ... | |
| Topic: "October" | |
| Aubrii Replies: 1 Views: 718 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:05 am Subject: re: "October" |
| I like it. One question though, why do you have a break in between te first two lines and the rest of the poem? is it meant to be there, is that how its supposed to be read, or was it an accident? J ... | |
| Topic: The Fall of Autumn | |
| Aubrii Replies: 0 Views: 624 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 10:51 am Subject: The Fall of Autumn |
| She stands there
watching the days go by so many chances her eyes preform dances and maybe its time maybe its time to take a walk on the wild side leave normality behind and maybe its time ma ... |
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| Topic: My first post | |
| Aubrii Replies: 1 Views: 573 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 10:26 am Subject: re: My first post |
| Hey welcome to UBW. Good first post, but allow me to critique, yes? yes.
/revised/ I'll keep dreaming that everything's alright but its hard to believe with all these stupid fights long nigh ... |
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| Topic: Friendship wasted | |
| Aubrii Replies: 7 Views: 1047 |
Forum: Lyrics Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:20 pm Subject: re: Friendship wasted |
| That'd be fun, we should ^_^ | |
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